Awwww I wanna write a romantic tragedy now, but I think i'll need sleep to accomplish that first ='D This story quiet possibly could bring me out of my nonexistant writing thing or forever writers block =3
Soooo.... I liked this. I liked the idea and I liked how you carried the story out. I really like your choice of words and the way you ended the story. I feel like certain parts of the story could have been flushed out more, but maybe that's just me in my preferring narrative over dialogue. Anyways, I enjoyed reading this, and I liked what you did with the prompt. Your grammar and spelling were good, which I also liked very much.
Yay, I'm the first one to write a comment (: I liked it, it wasn't filled with 'cookie cutter I forgive you'. I enjoyed it, for whatever it's worth. I'm actually happy Tom didn't forgive him, hmmm, that kind of sounded heartless, oh well. I like it as I said before haha.
June 29th, 2010 at 05:36am
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