Dream on Nightmare - Comments

This is the most adorable thing in existence.
<3

"He returned my week smile and kissed my forehead, as he wrapped his arms around me protectively, “you don’t think I can take ‘em?”"

This is the cutest thing in the world, it really is. I almost cried by reading this.

Awwweeeeh it's so cute.
It is it is it is.
I love it.
And I think I'm beginning to get a soft spot in my heart for Steve. xD
but I agree with Alex.
I vote for a full on story with Steve and Gypsy!

Woah. Freaking amazing. Your writing is divine. I wish I could write like you. There's a few spelling mistakes, but that doesn't take anything away from your awesome writing skills.

TEHEHE. IT'S SO CUTE!
Aw, it's better than I thought it would be, too. :D It's just adorable.
This was amazingly written. You keep getting better each time you write; it's incredible.
Steve was the cutest in this story. And I love the whole Steven and Gypsy pairing thing, it's really great.
You should just make a cockload of stories about them and make it into a little series. :]
Anyways, this was great. Really good writing.
Thanks for dedicating it to me, love.<3