My darling did her first drabble! And it was beautiful and tragic, and I loved it. There was emotion in it that I thought you conveyed really well. You and Angel both have that quality, and I swear, I wish I could create feeling with mine. But I adore this layout, and the story itself.
That was so dark and intense. For such a small amount of writing, it is just right. I could see that whole scene being played out in my mind. Good job hun.
Good job, babe! Really good job. :)