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  • CeraRachel

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    If you kill Jake,
    I will be very upset with you,
    even though you're such good writers.
    November 21st, 2010 at 02:13am
  • Zeldarae

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    When I read that Jake's in a coma my jaw dropped.
    I seriously thought he was a goner by how it was written.
    I love this story alway keeps me on the edge of my chair. (:
    November 21st, 2010 at 12:01am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    :O
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    sadness
    November 19th, 2010 at 01:11am
  • Revenge 5

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    DONT LET HIM DIE!!!!!!!!!!! D':
    November 17th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • Rawr-or-Roar?

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    I thought he was dead! D:
    I'm happy he isn't but you made me tear up! D:
    He better make it!
    PLEASE make a sequel~
    Jake has to make it!
    Sane is scary when he is mad.
    He better come out of his coma...for me and Sane's sake.
    November 17th, 2010 at 01:05am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    I THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD! YOU BITCH! HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME ASSUME SOMETHING LIKE THAT?!

    ....Now that I've gotten that out of the way I can apologize:P
    I like that he's still around, even if he is in a coma/comma (I'm too lazy to think of which one's right)
    November 17th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • AshlynnLyrix

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    OMG, Jake has to be okay
    November 16th, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • lexxiiiiii

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    omg i love chapter 30, when he said im sorry i thought he died i almost cried but was soooo happy he is in a coma, i hope he wakes up
    btw you are a brilliant writter :)
    November 16th, 2010 at 09:50pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Wow . . . I thought he was dead. :)
    November 16th, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • derder-chan

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    OMG you scared me there... I thought Jake died.. Thank gosh he didn't
    Love the update... keep on writing :D
    November 16th, 2010 at 04:34pm
  • bloodofdawn

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    I WAS SCARED TO DEATH!!!
    i thot jake died!!!!!!
    November 16th, 2010 at 06:47am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    good update!
    November 16th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • xxcupcakerapistxx

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    Oh my god your evil! I THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD!
    November 16th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Oh hotdamn. You had me thinkin Jake was dead! I was like NO! WHAT THE MESS?? I seriously got scared that he was. Omg. I've never that much of a rush in a long while.
    The chapter came really good.
    I'm mad Jake's in a coma but I'm SUPER happy he's not dead like I orginally thought.
    <3
    November 16th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • we are not amused;

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    I'm crying my eyes out.
    You had better be kidding me.
    I was so sure he was dead.
    Oh my god.
    Just...
    ;_;
    November 16th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • xXSisterOfTheWolfXx

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    Please Please Please Update soon!!!!!!!! Total cliff-hanger!!!!! =D hehe but i loved it.
    November 16th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    HEY! YOU GOTTA DO ONE OR THE OTHER!!:D
    sex scene or action scene(:
    they make up stories.
    not bullshit about love;D
    but love is nice too..
    i guess...
    if you're a pussy...
    or a woman...
    or a man..
    i guess a human...
    i'm not sure where i'm going with this
    or why i'm still typing..
    nice chapter(:
    November 16th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • CeraRachel

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    Well, because of the chicken out on the sex scene,
    you should have Sane describe it in the next chapter!
    Good idea, yes?
    Loved it anyway.
    November 11th, 2010 at 06:20pm
  • we are not amused;

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    Uh...Sure...

    You make my life.
    Really, truly. xD
    Loved that chapter.
    In a "ohmygodifanybodytouchesJakeagainsomebodyisgoingtodie"
    sort of way.
    You know?
    November 9th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • AshlynnLyrix

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    loved it, can't wait for more
    November 9th, 2010 at 04:03pm