Scream a Song for Nobody. - Comments

This is absolutely beautiful.
I love, love, love all of your descriptions. And I thought you ended it perfectly.
You have such a unique way of writing that it makes me want to cry. c:

Amazing.
I loved it.

Okay, first off:

My surroundings had varied; I sat now on coarse, soggy sand as apposed to my spotted comforter.
I'm guessing that's supposed to be opposed, apposed meaning "next to".

Other than that, it's absolutly beautiful you've obviously got a vast vocabulary (or a very handy-dandy thesaurus) and it really adds to the apparant effect. Though it wasn't too wordy, which I liked.

You've obviously got great talent man. :)

I liked how well you portrayed emotion in this. :)

wow great story bowie :3 i liked it a lot :)

I am one of the judges for Clark Kent;;;s contest and I really agree with her :). This was a good piece. It was really interesting when you described how the main character is in each month. You really did a wonderful job with this story. The title needs to be changed though. 'A' and 'For' should not be capitalized in a story title. Other than that, I loved it a lot :).

Wow, that was really raw and sad - I really liked it. Your writing really made me feel bad for the character and how empty she/he felt. You have really nice descriptions that fit the mood of the story really well.

Good work on this one, it was very interesting and a thought provoking interpretation of the picture. Keep it up and good luck :)