Hahahaha, I was reading this at work and burst out laughing out of no where. Poor Johnny, always getting the short end of the stick...ohh, I made a pun! Anyways, really loved it, can't wait for the next one! :)
I fucking love Halloween, so I love any time an author writes it into a story. The fact that the party was at Zack's house was perfect because we all know how much he loves the holiday as well ;) I can't forget the smut! I'm always down for some Brian smut, and you did a wonderful job (as always)!
Oh my god, I started reading this, this morning, and now I'm hooked. You gotta update soon! Please!! I'm so glad that, that dirtbag Chris got put away, and that Madi finally managed to get back in touch with her family :) Also that Madi was finally able to say "I love you" to Brian :3 Hopefully this comment helps you get some inspiration (maybe) to write the next update soon :) <3<3
Words can't describe how happy I am that Madi finally was reunited with her family. Just like T and Jennie, Madi's mum bothered me a little, but I'm gonna chalk it up to the time they've been away and hope that's all it is.
Sort of agree with T up there about her mom being so questioning, but then again it's been 8 years sinces she's talked to her family so I'll give them a pass. It was a beautiful reunion, but something isn't sitting right with me either, I can't put my finger on it but I wonder about Ethan's paternity for some odd reason, could be my over active imagination though.
And Brian is so good to her, she's really got a keep there in him. And if gracie has anything to say about it I get the feeling something big may happen sooner rather than later!!! <333
Ok, so why did it bother me that when her mother first got there, she was questioning who Gracie's father is? She seemed a bit snooty to me or something. I dunno, maybe it's because it's been such a long time since they've all seen each other. Something's just not sitting right. Guess I'll just have to wait and see how it plays out and maybe it'll hit me. :)
^^ I'm pretty sure everything I wanted to say, Jennie said before me. I love this chapter hun, even though having to go back to the house she shared with Chris was pretty emotional for Madi. I'm just glad Chris is FINALLY out of their lives and that Madi, Gracie, and Brian can move on :)
I liked this. And I agree with Madi, she's got new memories to make now, ones that will be much happier than the ones she had in her past. It's hard closing off a part of your lfie like that, but she and Gracie have so many things to look forward too, and they have a good man to look forward to them with. Madi has finally found what she has been needing the past few years. I can't wait to see how she reacts to tlaking to or seeing her family again, but with the support system she now has I get the feeling it's only going to enhance her life as she moves forward. <333