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  • Luna Moon Goddess

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    This is very good please keep writing
    December 8th, 2014 at 04:55pm
  • insaneangel18

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    Please update soon i wanna know dervila well meet the other girls :)
    December 11th, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • Kezabell

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    Aww, I really miss this story, please update soon!
    February 24th, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • pinkewinter

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    awwww i juust read this entire thing and i love it
    i wish you could continue
    November 23rd, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • stamfordbridge

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    I LOVE your story!! please update it soon!!!
    July 31st, 2011 at 08:12am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Alright, I had to re-read all the previous chapter again because I totally wasn't into the story line anymore
    Oh, no they got Eva.....fuuuuuck!
    *snorts' did he really think that by taking all the mates the guys would step back
    He has some other things coming to him
    The guys will get back what's rightfully theirs
    Hopefully the girls won't get any harm, especially Eva =/
    I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)

    Ps. After re-reading all the chapters again, I noticed you had many mistakes like capitalizing words or spelling in general. Just an idea, but you should maybe check them or soemthing :)
    July 18th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • Death_wish

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    I love this!! can't wait for an update!
    July 9th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • XlilmissmissyX

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    Okay! I'm waiting for the update :D have it come soon please?And I will love you forever
    June 2nd, 2011 at 12:31am
  • stamfordbridge

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    love your story!! plz update soon!! also I love your going down!!
    May 31st, 2011 at 06:00am
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    I actually like everything about the story so far. Very interesting I can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 8th, 2011 at 09:15pm
  • babygurl94512

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    I love it!!!
    I can't want for more!
    Amazing
    March 31st, 2011 at 06:32am
  • nikko

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    I love this story sooooo much! &its been soooooo long since ya updated....*subtle hint* :]
    Haha.
    March 29th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • XlilmissmissyX

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    ummmmmm update?
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:47am
  • redblood

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    Your story is really confusing..........but I love it!
    March 17th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • Rodeo Babe

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    this is good u should up date soon.
    January 10th, 2011 at 01:06am
  • Bipolar;Dementia

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    Noo i think she meant, like, "Muh dear" or somethin like that, pronounce it w/o an I. AND YOU FREAKEN AUTHOR YOU CONTINUE THERE'S NOT MUCH A7X WEREWOLF STORIES. DO IT.
    January 9th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Ohh, forgot to mention this in my last comment
    When the fought, you used lyrics in between, right?
    You should put them as itlaics or soething to distinguish them from the 'normal' text
    I actually wanted to tell you that you really gotta check some of your spelling again
    i.e. My new form let out a enraged war did you mean roar?
    and when 'master' talks “M dear welcome to the Castle of Sabans you missed a y there, I think
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:43pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Holy flip
    So, it was the first time that she had changed into her wolf form, right?
    Wow
    Hopefully none of the girls will be harmed anymore
    Hm, the guys really have to hurry and get the girls our of there
    I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    love it!
    I can't wait till she meets with Matt!
    please update
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:34pm
  • Bipolar;Dementia

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    I LOVE IT. SO MUCH. I raped it. =]
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:21am
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