Alright, I had to re-read all the previous chapter again because I totally wasn't into the story line anymore Oh, no they got Eva.....fuuuuuck! *snorts' did he really think that by taking all the mates the guys would step back He has some other things coming to him The guys will get back what's rightfully theirs Hopefully the girls won't get any harm, especially Eva =/ I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. After re-reading all the chapters again, I noticed you had many mistakes like capitalizing words or spelling in general. Just an idea, but you should maybe check them or soemthing :)
Noo i think she meant, like, "Muh dear" or somethin like that, pronounce it w/o an I. AND YOU FREAKEN AUTHOR YOU CONTINUE THERE'S NOT MUCH A7X WEREWOLF STORIES. DO IT.
Ohh, forgot to mention this in my last comment When the fought, you used lyrics in between, right? You should put them as itlaics or soething to distinguish them from the 'normal' text I actually wanted to tell you that you really gotta check some of your spelling again i.e. My new form let out a enraged war did you mean roar? and when 'master' talks “M dear welcome to the Castle of Sabans you missed a y there, I think
Holy flip So, it was the first time that she had changed into her wolf form, right? Wow Hopefully none of the girls will be harmed anymore Hm, the guys really have to hurry and get the girls our of there I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)