Vanilla Sky - Comments

Wow, Vanilla. I really like that name. =) (great, now I want icecream =P) Anywho, this, Missy, is one of the saddest and most amazing stories ever. I feel so sorry for her... To have to sit and watch your own mother...

I just really love how this is going, and I can't wait to see what else you do. You've just earned yourself a subscriber! <3

The way you write is so beautiful. It's gentle and caring. I can tell you care a lot about the world you've crafted. I love this story <3 and I luuuuuuurve the name Vanilla XD

The name Vanilla, despite what everyone else thinks, it just hard for me to get used too. I'm not sure why.
Other than that, I loved this. The title is really eye-catching and the layout is beautiful.
I can't wait to see where you're going to take this, I'll definitely be coming back to read some more. <3

This amazing so far...lovely title. I love the banner.
Vanilla sounds like a sweet name lol (no pun intended)

I love the name Vanilla. I didn't expect it at all. And the layout was lovely as well. Really simple, but doesn't take away from the story. I'll definitely sub and read more of this later (:
Awesome job! <3

I love this. I only read the first chapter because it's dinner time but I just love it a whole lot. The detail is amazing and everything is just awesome in every way! I already subscribed and after dinner I'll be reading Chapter Two. :)

I love this. C:

The layout, the detail, the girl's uniquely pretty name, and even the picture.<3 :) I love, love, loved it.
I'm like, attached to this story now, aha.<3

Amazing Job so far. :)

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I meant gran not grad

Title

I just had to smile at this. It's pretty creative!

Layout

Pretty, yet kind on the eyes. The font color is a bit hard to see. Perhaps make it a bit darker? Love the banner!

Summary

It's kind of cliché, but I like cliché. Lol Quite lovely and it set the person up for what is to come.

Story

1: This right here is a very grad story. Vanilla is such a unique name. I love the descriptions here and I honestly am very saddened about what poor V is going through. I feel really sorry for her.

Overall

Lovely story that should be update very soon. It is within love of this story that I will be subscribing. However, I did wish to inform you that I saw a few spelling/grammar mistakes. I say this only help, not to be rude or harsh. =) Just give a quick run through and the story will be perfect! <3

I love the name Vanilla, it sounds so innocent to me for some reason..
I really like this and I'm intriuged to find out what's going to happen next.
Just a note though, the font colour is hard tp read, I'm not sure if it's just my computer but I had a bit of trouble making out the words.
Otherwise, it was great(: