Just read your third update! In one day! Gosh girl, dont tire yourself out! I loved this, such a funny side to Jaed, and his clumsiness is very very endearing, this was brilliant, keep it up :) xxx
Two updates at once though gosh, you are spoiling us! This was a really good chapter though, I really like knowing some more about their pasts. It really helps to build depth to the characters, more please you! Xxx
YESYES. I saw this in my emails and was like, omg yes, yes, yes. I've missed this story and thank you for mentioning me, and my rather odd comments aha, glad i can make you laugh! And even better that these comments of mine can inspire a new chapter! I understand writing out lost prophets and Jona, I saw that whole sexist thing on twitter too and I totally lost respect for him. And I really love Jordan, he's so involved and it makes me happy :) love this story and you, keep it going you! Xxx
awh stahp it I'm blushing! This story is totally cool. Might not be able to comment tomorrow because I'm going camping buuuuuuuttt I like where this is going. Maybe like a crazy mad plot twist. Don't kill anybody though xx
Yayayayyaayayay!!! Love this, you're awesome and I'll try and keep going with the suggestions. Like I know Jaed has that whole pre cog thing going on I wanted to know if any of the others on tour have anything cool like that xxx
got a new phone yesterday so I'm back now!! It'd be cool to hear more about the other mates on the tour or about Jamie and Jaed's relationship. Maybe in someone else's point of view like Ian or something. Xxx
So, I was just casually browsing through my subs when I noticed this one was updated fairly recently. And all I have to say is.. SPLEEEE. I AM SO HAPPY. You had me hooked over a year ago, and now once again I find myself on the edge of my seat waiting for you to update. <3
Oh wow, you updated ! xD I'm so glad you did! When I saw the title of the story in my emails, I was really confused as to which story it was, and then about halfway through the first chapter I realised what it was, and I just read it all again :D Yay! x