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  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    Mm, I found that a little hard to read because it was just a bit clump of words. Maybe spacing it out into paragraphs would be better?

    As I was reading the part where the boy burnt his mouth on his hot chocolate and I burnt my mouth on my hot chocolate. Aha.

    Anyways, that was sad. The poor kid D:
    Nice job (:
    October 8th, 2010 at 11:01pm
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