August 22nd, 2010 at 07:43am
"Very many broken teenage hearts tonight" hahaha, oh man I can just imagine tons of little Josh fannies crying about it.
But im so excited to read the proposal!
Maybe in both POVs? (; i'd love to read both sides of the moment.
<3
Chapter Eleven
I will not fall behind..again!
I'm glad i'm not the only one who was confused about Zack, I figured it was just me..I think he needs a bit of a backstory maybe? like a chapter or a half, on how he became part of the band? Just a suggestion..
I like the prostectic leg, nice touch. (;
getting beer at age 16 though? eerr.. :/
I don't know what else to write, to tired to function..