I definitely agree with Cheye13, but the story is truly incredible already. I love that I've never read anything like it!! So excited for the next update :o)
I think this is a cute story, and it's fun to read. I love Val and Joon's friendship - it seems very real. On the other hand, I think some background information on Sam would be interesting to read. I mean, why does Val hate her mother so much, and why does Aaron love her? There are a couple hints, but it's just a little confusing to me. As for Aaron and Joon's relationship, it seems to be progressing pretty well. I can't wait to see how she gets out of avoiding the fact that she's moving in. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. =)
This is pretty wonderful. I'm curious to see how everything works out, and I still can't wrap my head around how Aaron, who practically just turned 20, tied himself down to a 43 year old. It's just crazy.