I Feel Like a Princess - Comments

  • pezzie

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    When I first clicked on this, I actually thought that it was a Ginny story for some reason. Hmm, I don't know. The title threw me off a little. I think you should add something about Lavender in the short summary.

    I really like the banner, but I'm not the biggest fan of the repeating background image. It looks like a pygmy puff! x]

    I also think that maybe you should space some stuff out in the summary because it looks very tight and squished. It would be a lot readable if you fixed it.

    I'm already excited to read this, because I know Lavender and her obsession with poor Ron. Ha.

    Oh gosh, I loved that. I seriously could picture Lavender freaking out and writing that in her diary. I imagined her stabbing the diary also, especially when it mentions Hermione. She needs to quit hating on Hermione because Lavender is no good for Ron! Haha.

    I really liked this, it was definitely cute. You should make this like a full blown story because I would totally read and subscribe to it!
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:33am
  • tiffany danielle

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    Very cute and silly.
    I liked it. (:
    July 11th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • die Bienen Knie

    die Bienen Knie (150)

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    Very nice, short and sweet and kinda silly.
    I like the layout but I think the summary is kinda long.
    I wanna write more but it was very short so there's not much to say...
    I hope you did well in your contest, Lavender bugs me though. Disgust
    I like how you tied it in with the actual plot too.
    July 5th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • Acid Milk

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    This cracked me up, too. xD I hate Lavender, though.
    July 5th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    This just cracked me up. Good job.
    July 1st, 2010 at 02:33am