Unforgettable - Comments

awwwww! she's falling for him!!!(:
update soon!! i can't wait for the next chapter

ahahaha! wow, Nicks... something else ahaha(:

update soon!!!!!!!!

Amazing I cannot wait for more!!

I love it update soon. :)

i love it please put more chapters up soon thanks!<3nat

Very good new begining.

i love it
plz put the chapter back up plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i like the chapter a lot.
update soon please?

great chapter

i love it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update

so cute! please update soon!!!!(:

Cute. Update soon please!

i cant wait for more of it update soon please and thanks!<3nat

I like this. I can't wait for it to pick up.
There's just one thing: you might want to try to adjust the spacing between chapters. Some of them are bunched together and it's harder to read that way. But that's it. Everything else is great. I really like the plot and the whole idea of it.
Can't wait for more! I hope you update soon! :]

I really like how the story's starting undate soon :)