Hm, I'm iffy about this piece. I like the meaning behind it. That the people who were otherwise made fun of for being intelligent and 'different' have congregated with the 'in' crowd. It's a great meaning, and a hope that someday the people who deserve to be noticed get there and the girl's that try to hard and are rude realize they're mistake. I definitely like the meaning, that's for sure. Just the writing is kind of...you have a great vocabulary and there are certain pieces that have excellent description. But there are parts that are worded oddly and kind of put off the flow you have going. Otherwise, it's a great piece.
June 13th, 2011 at 05:42am