A Woman's Pride - Comments

Sorry it took so long to get to this, I've been super busy. Just wow. You're story took my breath away. I absolutely loved this story. Seeing the accuracy in the historical aspect of it was amazing. I was a bit wiry at first wondering if it could be pulled off but was very happy when it was. I love the use of detail within this also and it makes me want to know what happened to the woman after she left. I'll post the results of the contest after after I finish reading the rest of the entries. Very nice job =)

FUCK YEs.

I love historical fictions. I adore seeing how writers portray them. It seriously makes everything just perfect.
I really did enjoy the way you performed the century, it's just...yes.

You described this very well...though if I were the woman I probably would have just sat down...
Anyways, I think you started and ended the story with great sentences and I liked how I could picture everything perfectly.
The ending was sad, but it made me kind of happy how strong she was even through the end.

Wow, I thought that was just simply amazing. I love the way you described everything that was going on, even outside of the office. I love the way you can show, not just a picture, but a movie.

His big belly is barely contained by his muted red suspenders tucked neatly against his body, underneath his open suit jacket. Large sweat stains spread out across his white shirt from underneath his armpits. Shifting the cigar around with his tongue, he drags his leering gaze down her form, stopping at her breasts.
My favorite two sentences would have to be at the end of the first paragraph, I can just envision it perfectly.

I love your writing, it's pure talent.