When I Said "We", You Know I Meant "Me" - Comments

Nicely written! Loved each and every detail of it, each sentence flows so smoothly and right. Kat reminds me of a friend of mine, too much. xD But really, nicely done. You're a very descriptive author!
Keep upt the good work.

I really liked this. It was kind of creepy, but extremely well-written and kept me hooked the entire time. I liked the layout, and loved the title. Really, really great job on this :)

Kat is evil, but I like it.

i still stand by my last comment. But the second chapter was great. Great descriptions. Im actually wanting to read more

Woah.
This was a great start.
I loved it.
It's so intriguing, like I have to read more. (:
It's so well-written, keep going with this!
:D

Wow.
I'm - actually gonna read more of this. -subscribes-
Any ways,
I love how you wrote this. It flowed well, together, and just -
more. Please? Nooooow?

The club scene was very well described. I had a full picture going on in my head. The layout was nice & clean & I enjoyed it. I shall subscribe :)

Great opener, you described the scene rather well. Keep writing, this looks like it has the potential to go places :)

This was very well written, and descriptive. The layout was simple and didn't distract me from the text. (I hope that made sense). Anyway, this was really good!

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Psh. I love this already.
You're descriptions are amazing and I'm sosososo jealous. Your writing is amazing. :)
I wish I could leave you a better comment, but I fail at writing comments so I'll just leave.
Yeah, this is great and I'm subscribing.

I didn't really likethe summary...to plain you know? Or maybe it was indented to be like that XD
I also wasn't a big fan of the layout.
As for the story, I absolutely love your descriptions. You really have something going here.

:}

I liked it.
For one, the layout was simple, and I liked the banner. As well as the title. :)
Secondly, I like your writing. It's just the kind of writing I'm in the mood to read at this point. A few descriptions really caught my eye, but I'm too lazy to relay them to you, sorry. :)
Anyways, great start. I'll subscribe.

This was pulled off really well. >.< I'm jealous. You've pulled things that I couldn't have dreamed off, especially the ending. The picture on the layout was really good, and I liked the little saying under it. I really enjoyed this piece.