Build God Then We'll Talk - Comments

  • Rawrlicious.

    Rawrlicious. (100)

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    I love it! Write more soon plz!?
    January 4th, 2008 at 10:07am
  • KakelynxSunshine

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    lolz,
    i constantly thank god for brendon.
    you know what i would change that too...
    -sigh- if only we could have principals who know that silence is luder and know what loud REALLY sounds like.
    Then, maby i would love lunch again...
    anyway, thats not why im here is it?
    Well, keep writin. I wanna kno moree.
    January 4th, 2008 at 07:41am
  • harlequin.

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    “Hey Oh!” Jon sang while walking into the living room. Why in the world is singing Red Hot Chili Peppers?

    -is RHCP dork-
    :tehe:
    January 4th, 2008 at 04:13am
  • Happy UnBirthday

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    you keep spelling quiet wrong.
    But aside from that I like it, and update soon
    December 31st, 2007 at 02:10am
  • i defy you stars.

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    i likes it very much...
    *agrees with ^*
    would love some longer chapters
    December 23rd, 2007 at 06:52pm
  • harlequin.

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    Aw. Brendon is tooooooooooooo cute.
    December 23rd, 2007 at 03:36am
  • Happy UnBirthday

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    I like it, update soon!
    December 22nd, 2007 at 03:55am
  • incredible_mess

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    aww damn 3d comment but whatevs lol. I love it ps ( I subsribed) lol
    December 22nd, 2007 at 03:10am
  • harlequin.

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    Just to let you know, sometimes your story will get banned if you you use "chat speak" (OMG, WTF, etc.)
    But, I liked it. I like the way Brendon had "five heads".
    -giggle-
    Make a long chapter, now. I'd like to see where it's going to go.
    <3
    December 22nd, 2007 at 02:54am
  • harlequin.

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    FIRST COMMENT.
    -tries to be nice-
    It was...kinda confusing. I think you messed some words up.
    Next time, just reread before you write,kay?
    And longer chapters.It took me negative two seconds to read (cuz she's magical! She is, she is!)

    Anyway, can't wait for more.
    In Love
    December 19th, 2007 at 09:02am