lolz, i constantly thank god for brendon. you know what i would change that too... -sigh- if only we could have principals who know that silence is luder and know what loud REALLY sounds like. Then, maby i would love lunch again... anyway, thats not why im here is it? Well, keep writin. I wanna kno moree.
Just to let you know, sometimes your story will get banned if you you use "chat speak" (OMG, WTF, etc.) But, I liked it. I like the way Brendon had "five heads". -giggle- Make a long chapter, now. I'd like to see where it's going to go. <3
FIRST COMMENT. -tries to be nice- It was...kinda confusing. I think you messed some words up. Next time, just reread before you write,kay? And longer chapters.It took me negative two seconds to read (cuz she's magical! She is, she is!)