All I Ever Wanted - Comments

Neon Green Laces are so hot.<3
Nough' Said. :)

Just picking. I really love this.<3 The ending made me cry happy tears and appreicate this whole romantic thing.

I mean seriously? Meeting her love and apologizing in the pouring rain as she pours out her emotions and then he forgives her and tellls her he loves her too? Gracioussss.<3

Tie my heart up in a nice package, because with this, it's all for you, aha. :) <3

Brilliantly Amazing.<3

The detail in here was lovely, and I like Sophie's name and character. She seems like a sweetheart and I like the fact that she's brave enough to continuously apologize. I think I feel some kind of attachment to this story now. I love it. :)

At first, I thought it was just going to be some boring old love story that could stand in for a cliche. But then I kept reading and I started to actually get like it :)

Troy looked at me for the longest time. Seconds lasted hours, and I watched him back, forcing myself to look right into his capturing eyes, trying to follow his thought process
^ I almost screamed out: 'Just forgive her and take her back you flippin idiot!' But then I remembered that this was a story and that therefore, Troy couldn't hear me because he was fictional character.

"I’m not sure," Troy said, and suddenly he gave a small smile which made my heart flutter with hope. "I’ve never liked going through problems on my own. You want me to be happy. I could only be happy with you."
Omigod! Yes!!!

Wooh - the ending made me smile and sigh a little. How I wish life resembled fiction in all the good ways too :)

I have to say that I freakin' love how your one-shots aren't tiny and have, like, no details - though I like the tiny ones too - and they have so much emotion to them. Troy and Sophie have such a forgiving and wonderful relationship. I would love to find that in a guy <3
Wonderful job! <3

I nearly cried durring this story.
The emotions were clear. I could see everything in my mind as it happened.
And Troy is possibly one of the sweetest characters ever created. I know my boyfriend would never forgive me if I did something to hurt him like that.

I really liked it because it's something I relate to. I though some of the thoughts where drawn out a little too much but I really think you captured the emotion and the imagery very well.

That was really great. I loved every detail of it, and you made me picture everything with your wonderful writing. I also loved your description of Troy. (:
Great job and good luck in the contest. :3

Mm, I liked.
Very nice, and well-written.
I rather love your writing.

One thing I noticed right off the bat with this story is your details about Sophie. I think she sounds like the most girlie girl you've ever created. Of course, though, you made up for that with Troy. He's more your style. But, you gotta love a man in Chucks, yes?

I also like that, since I know your stance on cheating, you went a bit outside the box for this. You created a real situation, with real people, and you put emotions and circumstance in it, all without letting your own opinion get in the way.

It was really well done, and I really like this story and it's characters. Great job!