This is just brilliant! XD It's cute and awesome and hilarious all wrapped up in one fantastic bundle :P I agree with AndieandtheJets ^ I'm really surprised there aren't more comments :/ I just know I'm gonna be reading this again and again :P <3<3
This is just brilliant! XD It's cute and awesome and hilarious all wrapped up in one fantastic bundle :P I agree with AndieandtheJets ^ I'm really surprised there aren't more comments :/ I just know I'm gonna be reading this again and again :P <3<3
I don't understand how you don't have loads of comments because this story is so damn good! Jake and Rayne are so cute together being the complete opposites that they are. I love this story and I love me some Jake Gyllenhaal. Keep up the good work :)
Hey! I love it!! For having so many readers it doesnt make sense that there are very many comments! keep writing! it's fantastic, and witty. I like how well developed and complex Rayne's character is!! and the sex scenes are pretty awesome too!
this is my favorite story at the moment, though i was sad when you went back into flashbacks cause i hate flashback but your flashback i actually like, shocking right, its because you made the flashbacks into the story and didn't have them in italics the last few chapter. you just had them normal and im rambling :) so yeah i like this story, its badass and rayne is badass :D