The Abandoned Boy - Comments

H 8R0K3N (100)

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wow that story is freaking awesome i so cant wait to find out what happend next!!!!!

December 20th, 2007 at 10:16am

play dead. (100)

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It's So...
Original.
Cool.
Awesome.
Addictive.
I Agree With What SpaceBoy Said Though.
More Discription.
.Subscribes-.
More When You Can.

December 20th, 2007 at 10:16am

S.T.A.R.S. (395)

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cool, awesome mad story! More? soon? please?!

December 19th, 2007 at 12:53pm

lily HOR. (100)

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wow.... this seem really good :]
because its hsort im like really wanting to know what happens!!
lol
this story seems really really good so far!!
please update more
:]

December 19th, 2007 at 11:46am

Ahaiel (200)

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I really love the idea, but I think there could be a lot more description.
For example, what is his addiction? Is it mental, physical, etc.
You could also create a little more feeling in describing the atmosphere, or perhaps some of his actions.
Other than that, like I said, the idea's great. I'm curious to know who the girl is and why he's all alone.
I'm assuming there's going to be more? Hopefully, because I find this really intriguing. :)

December 19th, 2007 at 11:31am