The Misadventures of Eric - Comments

This is an awesome story. Normally, I dont read Original fiction online, So you're a damn good writer if you can get me to be interested in it.
Keep working at this story, I'm hoping the Hobbits rescue Eric and his dogs

Oh, Eric.
Good job, again. Couldn't see any errors.
Update soon!

I like this so far :) I love readin fantasy stories and I like yours so far.
I see nothing wrong with it, perfect...who am I to judge when I have so many errors to aid on mine ^_^""""
Keep writing, I'm subscribing :D

Oh, this story. xD

I didn't see any errors, but I did notice the lack of a layout.

Would you like me to design one for ya?

Most Mibbians judge a story by it's layout, which is what you're not supposed to do, but whatever. :)

Update, man.