What Makes It Wrong For Us To Fall In Love? - Comments

Oh, wow, hello...
So, I just stumbled across this story and decided to check it out. I just wanted to comment to let you know, that I really liked what you had of it. I'm bummed that it was never continued, especially since it never got to the part where we see the beginning of it explained/how everything got there.
This story was very detailed. You made sure to explain everything little thing that happened, and I feel like a lot of writers often don't do that, so kudos. That means you put a lot of time and effort in this story, and I definitely admire that. However, that being said... there were A LOT of details. You described every little thing that happened, even when it wasn't totally necessary. In turn, that made it a bit redundant and a bit hard to read since you described every little thing that happened. Normally, I wouldn't complain about this sort of thing, since a lot of authors tend to neglect on that aspect, but this one just showed me what happens when it's overly done. It just gets to be a bit difficult to read.
That being said, though, it was still greatly written. :) I hope maybe one day you come back on here and are able to see my comment.
I'm not sure how you would ever continue, especially since it would seem off if you didn't continue with the detailed aspect of it. But then again, if you stick with that, then that will probably take you even longer for writing it, which is probably what made you stop or not have enough time for it in the first place. :/ So, there is a bit of a dilemma if you are ever able to continue this.
But just know, if you do, I will be here to read, because I am still wondering how everything will turn out. Leading up to what happened in the first chapter, and then after that. :O
But at the very least, I hope maybe you sign on and see my comment. Maybe just to put a smile on your face to show people are still reading this.
And, yeah. Not much else to say, but I did enjoy what you had of this story, and hope maybe someday you sign back on and see this. :)

<3 this story

I just started reading your story, then I read the authors note. Please don't delete it, I'm really loving it.(:<3

I don't think you should delete it, because I really liked it.
I just wanna tell you as a friendly gesture that mods and stuff don't let you post author's notes/messages like that in your chapters. So don't leave that up for too long because you could get in trouble and get your story suspended or deleted.

i love the story, wish you would update!

please dont delete it!! i love this story :)

Hey, so I just read your story, was getting really into it and then there was that awful author's note threatening to delete it! Please don't do it! I love your story and I think you should continue, I mean, you can't get rid of it on a cliff hanger like that <3

oh yeah and sex plz i want sex let there be sex i think there should be sex
this is me asking for sex lol k

omg christine i am going to cry if you delete this
i got all excited cause you told me you updated and then i saw this huge fucking authors note and i was like
"DAMMIT BITCH" but i love you :* so it's okay um yeah
please update
or i will cry myself to sleep lol k bai
that was good
more please

That was good more please

Updaaaaaaate!!

I just started reading it I like it so far

i seriously love this, and if you delete this, i might cry.

you're an amazing writer, and you can catch multiple personalities within a story, and its just amazing.

PLEASE UPDATE!

Please update!!

Christine, if you delete this, I just might kill you. I really want you to update this story, as it's fantabulous.

PLEASE CONTINUE ITTTT!!! <3<3
I would love you forever if you did :]

continue your fic!! :D

Please update this story soon! I don't want it to be deleted :(

an update! finally, yay!
especially with such a cliffhanger at the end of the last one
finally, Melanie and Jack <3 it's about time!
oh jeez, those guys talking are going to be important i think
aww! they kissed! ;D good for them :)
but this whispering thing is really scaring me...
oh thank goodness, just the guys, but they did ruin teh kiss xD
Alex is so damn rude sometimes haha but I still love him <3
aww her mom is being all embarrasing haha
he asked her out! Ahh! she's so gonna say yes ;)