If You Want to be Loved - Comments

Not only was this the best femmeslash I've ever read (which is pretty good, considering this is your first), it was the most original and well written story I've read in a long time.
It tops mine by far. I really like this a lot, and I'm glad you wrote it

I would like to say that I thought this story was excellent. I mean the story line was great, the age difference was great also. I also liked how you made her cheat before and then she changed. I liked how and where they met also, that was a great thing. I think that the usage of the quote was just great too. I really really enjoyed the story. I thought that it was a beautiful story and the emotion was really brought through. I'm really pleased with this story. Best of luck in the contest! :)

Okay, so here's the thing.
I'm straight.
And I don't read femmeslash, cause I find it too weird for me,
but for the exception of this contest,
I read it.
I really liked the idea of this, it was super cute, and sweet,
and I loved how you incorporated their emotions, how they felt,
and it felt as if I was there, actually seeing what they were feeling,
that's what I like most about this oneshot.
The idea was very light, and ya know... fluffy? I daresay.
That's another element of this oneshot that I do love a lot.
I think you did a fantastic job, and I wish you good luck in the contest. :]
xo