Everything Happens For A Reason - Comments

loved it

Cute! But I also missed the last two chapters...I dun know how...but I ish all caught up now! I love that their wedding went good and your outfits for it were really cute ^_^ and now on to France, City of Love. That should make for an interesting time *waggles eyebrows* so I can't wait for the next update! Glad your back to writing more and you definitely won't lose me as a subscriber!

Duh, either you've updated two chapters really shortly after one another or I didn't get a notification
Beacsue I sure as hell haven't read the wedding chapter before
But I'm glad that the wedding went well
And now they are in France, definitley a nice place to spend the honeymoon
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

*squeals* BABY! *clutches avery's tummy* Baby in there? helloo.....
Hehe I louved this upa-date! And the outfits! And McKenna! *whispers* she would be my bestest friend!
*gasps* she meted papa gates? The Guitar Guy? Yes, I do watch Jeff Dunham...make something of it! Haha! Upa-date soon. Ish going to see Harry Potter? Yuo should, its'a gonna be goooood!!
And Glad the Leana thing cleared up a bit, I do want her happy again but at the same time...i dunno.
And yesh, you ish did make a ninja outta Leana hwo poofed there....I kinda liked it like that cause I was all 'Oh my damn! Leana is a ninja! Dude!' Just saying...so upa-date soon. Cuz I love this story. and yeah. do it.

loved it

Aw, Avery might be preggers?
Haha, Brian didn't even introduce her to his family, well until this chapter that is
There's just a thing, in the beginning when they wnet shopping, you said that Leana wasn't there, but then she was all of a sudden
Thought you might know that
Aw, McKenna thought he was getting married to Michelle, but that wasn't the case
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

-.- Really Luke and the imparla and then you had to use that pic. I love you but seriously your a bitch.

loved it

Aww, that chapter was so freaking awesome
But I gotta agree with Violet about the two things that she mentioned
It's great that Leana is happy again, but it's way too soon after Jimmy's death just being a week away
But it's your story and if it makes you happy, i won't say anything :)
And then the tning with Val helping Brian with the ring, but then seeming like she totally didn't know
Maybe you meant that Leana helped him pick the ring?
But other than that the chapter was so freaking awesome
How Brian proposed, straight forward, but so damn cute
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Not to be harsh but I have a few critics...
For starters, while I'm thrilled Leana is happier, its been only a week or so since Jimmy's death and as in love as they were in this story...I just think its a touch to soon for her to be dating and what-not. But, its not my story so of course do what makes you happy for it ^_^
Next: I love how Brian proposes to Avery-Mae...its so sweet. But I was a little confused, in his POV he said Val helped pick the ring out but when they got back to the house, Val seemed like she had no idea.Maybe it was a tired typo?
But other than that...amazing update and I can't wait for more!!!

loved it

*tackles with a hug* Awww....Bri is soo cute in it! He keeps trying to convince Avery she's gorgeous! Its gotta happen one day! And I loved it when she mocked him be saying 'baby you look fine' haha that was priceless! Can't wait for more. Make it soon! <3

Wow, Avery really seems to have problems with her own appearance
I really hope that Brian is able to convince her otherwise soon
I'm really glad though that Avery gave her mom another chance and let her explain herself
Wonder how that date's going to go
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I Love this storyy.. (:

Aw, that was so damn sad
I really started tearing up when Leana and Avery had their speeches
I think you did great in this chapter that you lightened the atmosphere somewhat with the whole carrot talk
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen now
Hope you update soon :)

loved the update
to be honest i didn't think i was going to be able to read this but it was a great update

Amazing update. Truly. Though i confess...i teared up during leana's speech and tears spilled over a bit halfway through avery's speech. i loved the update though it was also sad. Kinda bittersweet ya know? And i think she was a little harsh on her mom thouh given the circumstances, justified for the way she reacted... Another moment of mixed feelings towards it haha... But i cant wait for another update :) more soon please!! :))

Damn, this was definitley unexpected
I mean you did tell you'd involve his death, but that it would be in this chapter
I knew that it really wasn't Brian's child after all
It was obvious that Michelle would do something like this
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

wow i wasn't expecting this
but loved the update

*cries* WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
I liked the updates but but buh buh bu-*sniffs* Jimjim. Thats tah tah...*sobs* Poor Avery!!!!!!!!!!!! More soon? Even if you did bring me to tears? *sniffs then whimpers* jimmy....