You Spurn My Natural Emotions - Comments

  • slumflower

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    OMG! Ther gonna meet one of the guys from all time low!!! I just no it
    October 24th, 2010 at 02:40pm
  • Dodger

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    I know I've been AWOL from commenting lately and I'm sorry.I've just started college and I'm so tired all the time I've barely even updated my own stories.I loved this chapter though,good ol Trin and Peyton fighting it out.We can always depend on them for a good scrap :)
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • Megasaurus!!

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    haha, there was a lot of violence, and either peyton and trinity are extremly strong or the guys are wusses haha either wayy i loved it (:

    update soon please
    October 20th, 2010 at 12:48pm
  • AimiAiko

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    I really ope P and T are going to be okay, I love those two so much, even since I started reading this story I have been in loved with them, if they fall though the story I feel won't be the same.
    You did a good job at writing the chapter, The fighting was just want this chapter needed, it has been too long. Hahah. Can't wait for the next one.
    October 20th, 2010 at 04:45am
  • OctoberIsForLovers

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    hahah woooow! i wish i had a sister like that!
    Only one comment? Jeeze, okay...you convinced me...ill be a backwards comment whore for you! :D :P
    October 20th, 2010 at 04:45am
  • Judgments.Reject

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    I hope Trinity finally lets Zacky in at the end, she deserves to be happy. Oh my god, I'm talking as if they were real people. YOUR STORY IS SOOOOO GOOOD!!
    October 13th, 2010 at 12:19am
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Emotional men rock! Yay Zacky!
    Aww. Johnny. </3
    October 12th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • StarBurn

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    You have no clue just how much I love this series!! I sit on edge everytime I check my e-mail waiting for the one where this story pops up!! Love it to death, keep up the excellent work!!!
    October 12th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • blaqrican13

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    are you going to post more thn 1 chpter a week
    October 5th, 2010 at 03:20pm
  • Dodger

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    haha i loved the part you put in your authors note 'I just needed her out of the way.' I think we've all thought that about someone at some point in our lives :P haha..poor trinners,but Peyton's just growing up,they both need their space.
    October 4th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • jessica5533

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    Man this story just keeps getting better and better. I wish you made a chapter where Trinity snaps at Peyton for her meddling in her business. I think it would just spice it up...even though we know they would make up.
    October 4th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Omg. Poor johnny. He's my fav (not in the looks sort of way xD)
    Gooo zacky!
    October 4th, 2010 at 12:15am
  • OctoberIsForLovers

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    oh nooo, what ever happened to Hoes before Bros? jeeze maybe someone should inform Payton about that
    October 3rd, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • OctoberIsForLovers

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    FINALLY!! jeezus, do you know how time consuming it is read 3?!? friggin stories to get caught up?
    jeez just cause i had to read all that you should update soon. :P
    October 2nd, 2010 at 11:34pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Haha omg. Zacky just owned Trinity. xD
    AND I think Peyton was over reacting. :( Poor Matt.
    Though, whenever it comes to Avenged, I always think they do nothing wrong. xD
    September 28th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • bitter.love

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    I <3 Zacky !!! He is soooo cute . Update faster!!!!!! Omg the best parts are comingg update faster!!!!!
    September 28th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • AimiAiko

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    Okay, so over the past month I have been reading your stories. . . I started school, so it took longer to read with no time to do anything, but man I love them!! The Hayes sisters are a laugh and I love them! I so can't wait to see what will happen in this chapter of their life. You are a good writer, so keep it up!
    September 25th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • Hope.

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    THESE THREE STORIES ARE BLOODY AMAZING.
    i don't normally swear on comments :3
    so it must be good.
    you have got to be like.. a writer or something!
    it's amazing.
    I didn't comment for the first two stories..
    i <3 Zack and Jack.
    I <3 Mikey.
    I <3 Matt and Zacky.
    Amazing stories :3
    please write more<3
    September 17th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • Airheart.101

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    Awesome work Peyton^^
    Cannot wait for the up-coming chapters, and I'm glad Brian's being like an older-non-incestial-brother to Trinity... She needs it:]
    September 17th, 2010 at 03:27pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    AHHHHH.
    Zacky is manning up! Go him!
    Trinity is being a female dog. :O
    September 17th, 2010 at 12:20am