Open Minds - Comments

Alchemist. Now there's a word I know.
Well, Nirali knows that they are vampires... Ooooo!
Is she gonna tell the others? And her brother is a werewolf! I would love to know how that happened!
I would like it if yous put in some more stuff on vampires, like what distinguishes them from normal humans; what kills them; how they act, etc etc.
But then again, that will probably come with time.

Oh, and once again, sorry for hogging your comments.

Sorry, I'm hogging all of your comments, but I can't stop telling you my thoughts about this story.
I love it, I think it's safe to say.

Yeah, Shannon is a smarty. And it was really interesting reading one of her visions. It was cool.

Hehe I read the 4th chapter.
Oh, Dimitri is sooo cute! And Kayne . . . blood . . . ohhh!! I know, I know!
‘HE'S TOUCHING ME AHHHH! OMG IM BEING HUGGED '
Oh my God, I cracked up at that line, it was so funny! My mum heard me and gave me this weird look.

Oh, and if you don't mind, can you tell me what book Taylah the Badass is reading?? What book are you thinking of when you write that bit?
That's just my curiosity getting the better of me...

Anyhoo, chapter 5, here I come!

Who doesn't like the VA series?? I mean, unless they havent read it but it is awesome, my fav!
Yeah, back to your story,
I'm only up to the 3rd chapter (I read the first 2 again because I forgot what happened because I'm dumb like that) and I love it!
Yeah, so Taylah is the badass, Shannon the cutie (I've already said this) and Nirali . . . hmm, I haven't figured her out yet.
She's interesting and cool and doesn't seem to hesisate in saying what she thinks. I like her!

Well, I'm gonna read the other chapters now!

Hey Eduardo Rock. Like ur name. I have read the VA series & I love it. Btw this is Nirali + u did spell it right. We will tell u more about me. I'm just glad u like the story so far.
Keep reading more & give us ur feedback.
Thanx

Taylah is a badass.
Shannon is cute (:
I want to know what Nirali (sorry if I didn't spell that right) is like.

So far, I like Dimitri best, but I bet that's just because his name is Dimitri.
I mean, I love Dimitri from the VA series. Have you guys read that?
I LOVE it!

*drool* Russian vampire.

Anyway, back to your story.

I love it! Didn't I already say that? Oh well. Seriously, I can't be bothered to scroll up and look, because it involves moving my hand from the keyboard to the mouse.

Hmm... I'm loving the desciptions of the guys too. Sooo smoking hot!

I bet their vampires. Are they? Is that why they have gold eyes?
Or am I just delusional.
Ha, anyway, loving how you put supernatural, fantasy . . . stuff in there, with like, the girls.

Well, I'm gonna gooooo now.

Bye!
Can't wait for more!!!

Hey Taylah. Love the story.
It's turning out well & I'll get my part done soon but keep writing.

comment virginity!!!! lol i like the new story ;)