We Are the Innocent Ones - Comments

final reread the prequel and read this one! It was so good! Thank! :)

How did Roni go from being 19-21 when Caleb went from 12-13 in chapter 5? Other than that, I shall proceed to the prequel now. I liked Alejandro, although I must say it was very abrupt how he hooked up with Veronica. I suppose his never revealing his past to her helped constitute part of their 'fuckbuddy' image rather than true mates. The lack of intimacy definitely added to it. Hm...I think the story could have used a lot more of Jane and Alec- they are her family after all. Embry too, I'd say... I liked Caleb. He faded out a teeny bit.

Wow I just finished reading the sequel! I am very much so impressed & I loved both stories. I wish there was more on Roni & Em though. I so love reading about their characters, but I guess it does have to end at some point huh? I think I'm gonna read Brave This Storm now too, lol. Just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed your story & if you decided to make another sequel that would be great!! :)

This was absolutely amazing!!!!

need to create a sequel to the sequel you wrote great story

I really loved your story!! Just something freaks me out a litlle bit lol is that my son's name is Caleb and my name is Marie.. So it was kinda strange to read about their love hahaha. but except that it was really awesome!! I'm just happy that it wasnt about edward or jacob.. They have too much stories on mibba haha.

I can't believe it's over, I love this story, and I love Brave This Storm, I can't wait :D <3

Aaah! I can't believe it's over! :O
So heading straight to Brave this Storm now!
<3

Your story was amazing and I fully enjoyed reading this up until the very last chapter! :)

LOVED IT!!! amazingly awesome please update soon =]

perfect wedding!
perfect speech by awesome jasper!
perfect dialogue!
perfect story line!
perfect characters! (original and nonoriginal)
and PERFECT AWESOME STORY/ENDNIG/BEGINNING!

I never thought Jasper would have it in him to be hilarious! Maybe he was getting high off so many people's happy emotions xD I never knew about that tradition where the groom had to take the garter off the bride. So that was totally different. The dresses and suits were absolutely wonderful. Usually I skip wedding chapters because they're always boring, but you did really awesome job keeping my interest in the wedding.This story is an amazing read <3

at first when i read the last chapter, i was like 'did i miss something?'
but then i kept reading and i calmed down.
Roni's dress is beautiful, and the other outfits are great. i bet Caleb looks very handsome in that white suit :)

a happy ending for all :)

Im sad it's over cause I loved this story so much, but it was a beautiful ending :) x

either i haven't been getting emails telling me this was updated, or i've just been overlooking them, or i clicked on the link but never got to read the update.....who knows.

EMMETT CULLEN YOU MARCH YOUR VAMPIRE BUTT TO WHEREVER VERONICA IS AND BEG ON YOUR KNEES FOR HER FORGIVENESS.

sorry for the yelling. my shift button takes over sometimes.

please update soon! :)

Ahhhhhhh!!!
I love your story....
Update soon pleeeeaaaassee........
It's a story that just keeps pulling me in!!!

You know what I'm gonna say!
As always, amazing! And can't wait for more! I'm so fucking sad that this one's ending though! D:
<3

LOVE IT!! Can't wait for next chapter!!

Dude.. Roni's damn unreasonable in this one.. :S

Well written and all, but I didn't really like it :P
-Xx

Seriously, Emmett shouldn't have a problem with leaving family. He could just run to them anyways -___- We should have a party at the end! Bring on the champagne!! or... soda xD