I came across this and have deemed it to be a somewhat odd, but satisfying combination.... (In relation to the Mikey/WiL situation) *Laughs* I've seen william control 3 times, and still cannot get enough. Even my mother enjoys it :P I do admire your writing style... It's almost as if darkness has emotion.
this was truly remarkable!! I aspire to write as good as you do :) This is deffinetely going in "favorite stories to read", landing in at number ONE!! Keep it uppp :)
This was... interesting. I can honestly say that I've never read anything on mibba about a BMSD club, but that's beside the point. Your grammar as well as your spelling are superb, and everything flowed really well. A lot of stories, especially one's as vivid as this one seemed to be, are all over the place, but you definitely kept it together. You're a really good writer.