well lucky enough im on break at the moment. i want to, just cross your fingers my 3DS doesn't make me a zombie! I want to bring closer to it, or at least try to. So Yes, I will try to finish it. :)
Ooh, I love the update ! Despite the fact it took so long; that's all right, tho.(: Aw, I also felt like crying near the end. Your way of writting makes things just so.. Emotional ! :)
So happy that you updated this story. I missed it greatly. I can't wait to see what happens next, it did break my heart when i read it. Feel so bad for Olalla and she can see right through him so well, craziness!
I second everything locust said! Loved it! a terrific writer, you are, and that right there wa some amazing writing! Loved the depth in it. And I love the fact that somebody's writing something sad for a change!
Your updates always elate me, no lies; but then I remember how sad this story is going to turn out, and then I feel sick for enjoying their torment. To say that I utterly enjoyed this chapter probably makes me sound disgusting, but I honestly did. Only you know how to captivate such a sad confrontation, and make me want more each word I read. Beautiful words, I tell you!
I love it, and I love you. Your writing is phenomenal, darling! But you already knew that ;)
Wow... can I be neurotic for a split moment and say that shit is going to get real soon? I'm going to be apathetic and say I can't sympathize with either of them... though este nino has cajones for actually allowing his family to drift into his mind without the subjecting them to carelessness. This guy is heading for the screwed over lane, and I won't lie when I say I am kind of diggin' the anticipation for it.
Though I gotta give it to you, cherie - you write short chapters, but I am tellin' you like I have told you for awhile... you make it work so well. Like an articulated and ornate design you crafted, and it totally works. I love it.
Obviously my review sucks cause I am so limited to writing something intricate, but you know if I gotta tell you... I'll tell you otherwise. But anyway, I love this and love you more! XO
awww how sweet even though Fernando is cheating on Olalla it seems like Victoria is falling for this man. lol Theres gonna be drama there. What if Fernando doesn't feel the same and just wanted some fun or falls in love with her and he's stuck between the two. The shit will hit the fan eventually and she would find out would she still stay when she finds out he has a wife and child and another one on the way? so much baggage. Can't wait for the next one
i want to, just cross your fingers my 3DS doesn't make me a zombie!
I want to bring closer to it, or at least try to.
So Yes, I will try to finish it. :)