The Tension and the Spark - Comments

Oh god! How will she ever choose?! Great story.

I love this. I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally do. Gotta say though, I'm on Team Kris.
Keep writing, it's awesome. :)

Wow....just wow, now i can't decided who's team i'm on.....

I just wanted to say that I really, really like this story, a lot. You're an excellent writer, and it's a very sweet story. However, and please don't think I'm trying to be mean or snarky for saying this, but I'm having problems seeing any faults with Kahlan. She just seems so perfect most of the time, and it's a bit unrealistic. However, this could just be me not reading into this enough. I just thought I would point it out. But like I said, this is a great story, and you're an excellent writer. :)

I literally died of laughter during that chapter. It was too good.

loving it, keep up the good work

So the ending of Chapter 3: damn. Those are some intense words that just lash at my heart and make me teary-eyed. Please update soon :]

Just found your story and i'm so in love with it. Hoping for another update soon, i had tears in my eyes, i feel so bad for Max, I wouldn't mind snuggling in bed with Max

I love your story so far. I also love Max. I hope you update soon.

Love the Darren Hayes reference. I almost bugged out when I saw that. GREAT choice and it automatically makes your story awesome. Plus, I <3 Max Talbot. Can't wait to read more

I like this story =) It's really good so far (i've only made it to the end of the first chapter xD) But I wanted to point something out, the main character said she looked up at Max and saw his eyes were wet...ummm if they were in the shower together wouldn't his whole body be wet all ready? Just thought I would point it out..

How cute is this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!! Can't wait for more!!! :)