Carbon Dioxide - Comments

Mmmm Taylor Lautner.
Om nom nom nom.
That's all I can focus on dammit.

Seriously, the amount of awe I have by your writing abilities is not healthy.

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Wow. You're a great writer. Your use of words, the descriptions and imagery are amazingly done. The imagery was really put into my head and I could imagine it all in my mind like a movie being played out... ironic since Taylor is an actor ::tehe;

Slowly, deliberately, he sinks down, vision blurring, the sun the last thing he sees that ending gave me chills and I almost started crying.

Good work.

I loved it!
The last sentence was my favourite.
Not because it was over, but because it so very clearly described what was happening, and yet it didn't, in a way.
Very well-done.
Great job!

Wow.
this is incredible.
you wrote so much in such a small amount of words.
I'm not a Taylor fan, but that doesn't even matter, this story is perfect.

wow. That was so sad but so beautiful.
Wonderfully written, I could practically feel what Taylor was feeling.
Amazing job.

You were amazing at describing things...sad ending though but short, sweet and to the point.

That...That was beautiful. Like...I can't even.
It was very sad, but just so well-worded and beautifully written.
I like the concept of the story, and of course, all of the description.
It was short, yes, but everything's clear, nothing's cloudy or in a gray area.
I think there should be a sequel to this.
Great job.