I absolutely love this story. This is like the third time i have read it. I think the way you ended it sounds like there could be more and you should do a sequel to it
Chapter 17 is by far my favorite chapter i have read do far ot was the funniest & just all aroud the best you did an excellent job! geno why? ovie to frikkin funny :D adore this story
just found this story & like lots already, im on chapter 4 & had to comment loved the entire chapter but had say that the last line “Don’t worry,” Jordan said, striking a pose. “I’ll just flex a lot to distract everyone.” made me laugh out loud literally and the line 'Geno offered to stay behind and “guard the drinks" what geno doesnt swim? thats all im onto the rest of the story :D
OHH! i totally saw a tiny version of this coming! oh i'm so happy! i want them to get married and pop out tiny sidney babies right away! too far too soon? maybs. i'm so happy! woo! <3333333 and what's going on at the bellagio?? cant wait!
YAY update XD that's the best thing ever "yes I will NOT marry you." wish my boyfriend was that original gosh. hahhaha update again soon please cant wait to see what he has in store for her now XD