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  • eighteen inches

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    You'd be right about the everyone I caught it when reading back through but my internet spazzed and couldn't be bothered to fix it.

    He's mentally handicap. But what's the disease? -ponders-
    December 21st, 2007 at 06:23am
  • Ahaiel

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    I love the sort of shot choppy way you write at the beginning
    Again, your stories are amazing In Love

    Everyone in a long while...
    I think you mean every once...unless I'm an idiot o_O

    I am a tad bit confused though, I know you say he's mentally ill, but do you mean he's mentally handicapped, has tourettes or he's autistic or something like that, or he's just mentally ill?
    Maybe I'm reading too much into it :lol:

    I love it though, update soon :D
    December 21st, 2007 at 06:09am
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