Ahw, that was so sad. I could feel every blow that she felt too, and I've had that exact thing happen to me, too. I used to wish for him at 11:11, but then he told me he would never like me like that, and I sorta died inside. Now, I never wish for anyone. But thanks for such the heartbreaking oneshot. :')
“I tell you lies when you ask me what I’m wishing for at 11:11. I wish for you...each and everyday and I secretly hope that you wish for me too.” - This line is just..me. It says exactly how I am with this guy I'm 'sort of' falling for.
It was sad, and just good! It was written so..amazingly! And the title went so well with it!
Really the only thing that could be fixed is that everything needs spacing.