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  • The Runaway Child

    The Runaway Child (100)

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    I Loved It :) x
    September 24th, 2010 at 05:05pm
  • FrankFrank

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    I like the begininng .A Bit Intense For Me.Maybe In The Next Chapter You Could Introduce The Chracters and explain the relationship further.Still Good

    FrankMan
    July 5th, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • RushKnob

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    I like the beginning, can't wait to see more.
    July 5th, 2010 at 02:41am
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