I'll Brush Away Your Tears - Comments

I like it :) I'm waiting for an update<3

I like it! Its cute [:
You better keep writing, or I shall eat you! *nom nom* !
Update soon <3

I like it good writing(: Update soon please

this is good so far.... please continue i really like it so far

I wanna hug Kameron D:
Or Skylar.
Wait, they needa hug each other.
Make Kameron happy? 8)?

Don't mind me, I just creeped your profile and decided to read this.
I kind of really like this :)
Skylar is just lovely <3
I want him to make Kameron all happy and such.
That's be just wonderful.

<3 i love this. :)

Rawr. One update. In three weeks. Bejeezus, Zacky. It made me smile when I read it, though :]. Except for when he had scars. Wah :[. Make Kameron happy? Pwetty pwease???

Hey! xD I was looking through my comments on Sensations since I love the story and I realized that I never responded to the long one you gave me. I figured since you were my reader, I owed it to you to become one of your's.

I think that you have a nice beginning. My only complaint is that you basically told us everything about Kameron in the first paragraph of the first chapter, not allowing him any mystery. Also, in the first chapter you said he's a senior, but in the summary you said he was in college. I just thought I'd point that out to you. You characterized him well.

I like Skylar more then I do Kameron, but that's probably because I always love the one's that are helping the defenseless one's. It seems that it's naturally easier for you to write for him then Kameron as well.

Anyway, it's natural for a writer to hate their work. You are always going to be your own worst critic. I hate more then half of the things that I post up, but it's only natural. If you loved everything you wrote there would be no challenge for a writer to get better and outdo others, you know?

All in all, you seem to be off to an interesting start and I bet you'll become happier as the story progress. With that said, please update. (:

This is really good, can't wait to read more

yikes, kameron blushes at EVERYTHING.
that's why he's a virgin - cuz all the blood is always rushing to his face and not his...you know.
anyway, i'ma likin' this so far.
skylar's really blunt, which is sorta great.
idk, i love blunt ppl. they're more real.
update soon, m'dear.
(and btw, thanks for the comment on my story. i'm a little late, but appreciation is STILL present :D)

well, you definitly arent a bad writer. you're very descriptive. i find it refreshing. and i like skylar, he seems...wise. but there's only been one chapter in his pov so...update soon?

-Denise

I dig this story,
and Skylar reminds me of my friends :D
updates are loved XD

poor tiny kameron
HE NEEDS A HUG!

i like this(=. i think you should keep it going, please? ={

-Denise

I think u should keep going tho how hes a virgin after being raped confused me...XD

So I personally think you should continue this.

Because if you don't I'll be really depressed

'cause I <3 this story already

@hugs.from.holly
He can be a born again virgin, because I mean who
would want to remember, or count being raped their first time?

i love the story zac and yes plz contiue the story ur doing a great job on it littlegaybrotha

i love it zacky(:

I love it:]. I simply adore it. Update some more, please:]