The Darkness - Comments

Gah! Too bad this is a 1 shot...I really liked it and it would make a great story D;

Gah! Too bad this is a 1 shot...I really liked it and it would make a great story D;

OMG!!!
I loved this.
It was excellent. Now I'm off to read the other story.
=D

I loved it.
But it made me cry.
Anyways, it was a little too much for me to take, since I adore the people in the story that died.
But still, I loved it. : ]

I really like this.
Kinda bad that everyone dies though.

*squeee*
i can't wait for the sequel!
*huggles*

this is a great one shot and i think it be amazing.

^^^ told me about it and i'm glad she did

I would love to see this turn into more than a one-shot.
I also promoted your story in my story :P
Can't wait to read more!

I just read the one shot and I was like aww wow that would make a great frerard prequel and then voila! The authors note popped up and made my day ^_^
He he I adored the one shot and I would LOVE to read the full story so yeah... cannot wait ^_^

Thankies!

:o This was a great story. I love it a lot. It's gory, you're right, but I love blood and gore. So this type of story was a great read. Bert in this story was so evil... but in RL he is such a legend! haha.

Bravo!!! Your one-shot is awesome!!!