I Need You So Much Closer - Comments

  • LadyWolverine0421

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    AHHHHHH
    I love you.
    I better be with Garrett haha
    I want an update ASAP
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • itsahit

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    Oh, John... what a dumbass. He needs to figure things out.
    Update soon?
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • taking..chances

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    addicting. it's amazing. my love for john grows everyday. i love you.
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • heytheredelilah

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    oh my god!!!!! i can't belive that happened!!!!! KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!
    August 4th, 2010 at 10:40am
  • John O'Callaghan

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    This story is amazing! It's beautifully written and the characters seem so vivid and realistic :) I can't believe Kennedy could be so mean! Update soon! I'd love to see how this unfolds. :)
    August 4th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • feel_alive

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    please please please update soon! the story is reallllllly amazing!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 08:06pm
  • abyssopelagic;

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    THIS IS FUCKING AMAZINGGGG
    PLEASE UPDATE?(:

    Ooh btw I have a Shaun white story out
    Check it out and comment plz
    August 3rd, 2010 at 08:34am
  • Katycakes

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    You made me cry Dammit!
    Anyways, stupid Kennedy.
    Stupid, stupid, stupid.
    I can't wait to read more!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:55am
  • sunshinegoldie

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    Hi! Thank goodness you updated; I've been craving this story! I'm reading this on my phone, so I can't really copy a favorite part, but I loved the flashback. I really love the relationship that Kenny and Stevie had. He was so good for her! Anyway, can't wait for another update!
    PS: I LOVE the piano version Like We Used To. Its gorgeous!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:47am
  • superfina192

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    Poor stevie :( thanks for updating :) made my day wayyyy better.
    August 3rd, 2010 at 04:59am
  • lies; unanswered

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    This chapter made me giggle. out loud. several times. Haha, I love it. :D
    July 31st, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • missy101kt

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    The whole sign my butt thing made me laugh out loud
    July 31st, 2010 at 05:01pm
  • heytheredelilah

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    haha i feel like an evil genious now. oh be prepared for me to tackle you :)
    July 31st, 2010 at 03:23pm
  • Katycakes

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    You owe me a big hug bizz! <3
    lol
    Love the update.
    July 31st, 2010 at 09:35am
  • jessi_sunshine

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    *cracks up* OH MY GOD, THAT WAS FUNNY. '"Sign my butt!"' *burst out in maniacal laughter* That was freaking hilarious. Loved it. And they are SO going to know it was them when they find sawdust in their tank. That is, if John doesn't know already. He's pretty good at reading Stevie. Plus, he knows her too well, and if Stevie could see her friend, someone else was bound to. Ohhh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks so much for updating!
    July 31st, 2010 at 08:36am
  • captainzetty

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    Loovee it!
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:50am
  • sunshinegoldie

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    woo! new chapter! fav part:
    "It was Kennedy who burst out with the question, for John just looked apprehensive, like he knew I was full of shit. Of course I was full of shit, I wouldn’t dare consider dating another person unless John was simply a distant memory."
    oh john, you can always read stevie like a book! i guess i really like this part because even though stevie hates john, and even though john knows he screwed up, they BOTH know that stevie couldn't love anyone but him. also, i loved the jenny part. it's not even funny how many small girls with sqeaky southern accents i know. =P
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:29am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    oh snap. now they think she's a lesbian... ok.
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:27am
  • superfina192

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    I actually searched twitter to see if jenny was real... HAHAHA it wasn't. I want to know the result of the brilliant sawdust and stevies new GUUUUUURRLFRIEND! I need to see Johns reaction! Instead of a cyber hug, how about another update :D ?
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:22am
  • itsahit

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    “STEVIE!” A familiar voice yelled out before I could set eyes on the extremely attractive singer. I turned my head to the side just in time to see my drummer sprinting towards me, not slowing down even though she was going to ram my figure harder than Travis ever did.

    I had to think about that line. "Ram my figure" sounded really sexual, so I was confused until I read it over again.
    The whole Jenny thing was hilarious. It is so something I could see happening in real life... maybe not the sign my butt part.
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:16am