This was a nice story. The layout was nice and easy on the eyes. It fit well with the story, same with the title. I really liked the first chapter. But in the last and last bit of the second chapter I think you should have put a bit more detail into your story. Otherwise your story was cute and a bit realistic. Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.