Rorschach - Comments

I'm curious as to how Blaine and Rue ended up where they were, haha.

I really do like the story so far, and I'm excited to see the next chapter.

Chapter Two

I don't know why, but I really love the names Blaine and Rue. They're just different, and I like that.

Chapter two was wonderful, like the first one, and I'm going to subscribe. :)

Chapter One

I'm going to start out by saying I really do enjoy this story. My favorite passage was: The window to my right was open, letting the Autumnal breeze wisp through the room. It was able to lift my soul and trail the remnants to another world. I felt myself slip away.

I don't know why. Although there's not too much description, the small pieces of description you have keep it wonderful.

Onto chapter two. :)

Thank you very much! <3 More is to come very soon, guys. I've already started writing up the next chapter.

I can't wait for more, you are an excellent writer! :)

Well, Ardyss, you're definately as wonderful a writer as I thought you'd be.

Poor Rue, what happened to her?

Anyways, I'm intrigued, and can't wait to see what happens next. And I didn't see any grammer mistakes, =D.