Codename: Loser - Comments

OMGEE this is all i do in A/A in read your stories! they're really good! :P

LOL OMGEEE!!! NICE STORY NINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
♥ ya!

Thank You Analphabeta, you're comment makes a lot of sense (: Thanks for commenting, complementing, and constructive criticism (: the oh so important Three C's

Okay, first of all: This is extremely funny. It had me snorting giggles the entire time. Also, when Krissy said hi to Andy, it made me wonder a few things...I want to read more and know why she was being nice.

However, yes, your chapters are short. To get rid of this problem you could try describing more, like the environment of the school and the looks of the characters, or what's going through Andy's mind. I didn't really feel like Andy and his friends were characterized enough, and the plot moves a little too quickly. On the other hand, this story has a lot of potential and I'd like to see what happens next, because it's really funny. :)

im sorry lol. when i write it in my notebook it's pages long, and then when i type it up they very short D': do you think that i should combine chapters?

Your chapters are extremely short, and they don't have much purpose to them so it's hard to get into.