A woman scorned - Comments

That was so unexpected. I was like "oh jeez, not one of these again -yawn-" when I started reading it, but at the end I was like "AHAHAHA OMG THAT'S AWESOME!"

This is the worse story ever! But maybe that's a good thing, because you made it all sound so real, despite the fact it was short. I love evil, but hurting a person you love to that extent is a bit over the top for me. Thanks for yet another great oneshot. :)

I definitely did not expect that.
This was just absolutely wicked.

Positively evil.
I loved it!

xD
MAUHAHAHA!
<333 I'm gonna subscribe to this, just so I can read it again.
Damn; that was epic.
A little over usage of commas. Like, where you put some, they should be periods instead. They just kinda turned into run on sentences, but that was killllerr.

Holy crap...I was not expecting that.
I loved it.
Good job!

This was wicked!! I love your description and how sweet you made Rebecca seem at first!! Amazing job.