This is truly beautiful. You've really captured the pure emotions involved in the band, which I think is something people overlook entirely too often. Well done. [:
May 23rd, 2011 at 05:17pm
You know, I've never been big on fan fictions - and I think it's because sometimes I sit there and wonder what would they think about a story being written like this. But, I absolutely adore fan fictions where an element of their art is being explored.
Like your story here.
I love how the story focuses on one night, one moment. I sat there and as the story went on, I had this feeling inside me. I think I felt a little anxious and a little nervous - a little tense at what was happening in the story. :] I loved the description, and I loved how you explored it so well.
You made it feel extremely real, that's for sure.
I also like how it was just that one moment. :] That really also made it feel pretty real. :]
