Too Soon - Comments

  • casual affair

    casual affair (100)

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    And I'm sorry it took so to judge your story; I've been a little busy, mixed with forgetfulness.. x)
    Anyway, I like the flow the story had to it.
    It eased from one thought to another.
    But, I was a little bit confused through out the whole thing.
    But, I didn't spot any errors, so that's a plus.
    Nice layout as well. :'D
    July 13th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • pezzie

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    Yeah, I'm wondering who's point of view it is.
    I LOVED the layout. I thought it was incredible.
    And you're a really good writer, I liked it. :D
    July 6th, 2010 at 04:08am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

    XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX (150)

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    I found this rather enjoyable, even if short XD

    It was the Sorting Hat's point of view, right? And the three raven-haired people were Harry, Voldemort (oooh! I said the name! XD), and Snape, right?
    Just making sure!

    I liked =3
    July 6th, 2010 at 02:59am