I liked the simplicity and how it was written in third person. It was interesting because it could apply to anyone, as said in an above comment. What I liked most, though, was that it was purely fear. There was no other emotion in this other than fear; it added a really intense feel to it that I liked.
I liked the simplicity and how it was written in third person. It was interesting because it could apply to anyone, as said in an above comment. What I liked most, though, was that it was purely fear. There was no other emotion in this other than fear; it added a really intense feel to it that I liked.
Well done! :)