Salt on the Wounds - Comments

Thanks, but this is just a oneshot, though. Thanks anyway. :)

Hmmm..yes it was good but honestly are you going to expand one the movie\book? Then if you are it is a good beganing. But if you want to make it your own style change the way they were chose and the how and why the person who wins got it. L ike for example one of them over hears the wonka guy thinking of giving it to charlie so all of them makes a plot to get rid of him...and so on.