Wow that was really deep! I have never read a story that screamed with so much emotion like this one did!
July 6th, 2010 at 04:54am
The emotion is definitely raw in this, and I love the anger towards her and what she did. Heck, I'm annoyed with her too.
But the point is that you make the reader annoyed with this character as well. You make the reader feel the annoyance and hatred towards the character, and want to feel that too.
A very well written drabble, I'd say.
